Reuben A

Dooooonnnne! (Oooh I like the 'pretty please' mwa ha ha haaaa!! :twisted: :twisted:)

Alooo! Since its for school, I showed every grammar/spelling mistakes I could find... *removed*. Add a comma after while and before they... *removed*. Maybe imagine instead of image? *removed*. Be ...

The popularness of this thread scares me. And people, we who have never met bolt, still don't know anything about him! Or her. Looking at all the previous comments, I'm ...

why did you quit horse-ies?!

Banned for reminding me that I hate Mondays! (MY WORD THATS WAY TOO MUCH TIME SPENT ON MONDAYS!! :( :( :( :( :( )

That's so nunu-pie! But warning. look at everyone! I smell a playa! YWS IS A PLAYA! :shock: :shock: :shock:

Wow, it was... wait let me get to everything else when I've done the nit picks... “Dudley! The Professor ha d s the Device.” Dudley also known as Logan helped ...

Elooooo Whisperer! Wow, well its pretty perfect so the things left to crit isn't really all that important, but it might help so... ...holding each other’s hands as they stared ...

Alo all YWS people! I was away for AGES (Wow the amount of times I've said that :shock: ) But now I'm finnally back, and I need to get back ...

wow you're in demand!! Must be good...mmmmm Please review my :"Canonoscuridad part I" Be mean! :twisted:

WOW!! I don't find pieces that I REALLY like a lot but my word this is good! The only real thing I noticed: At first glance of the boy she ...

ooki I won't worry too much about the age, but I still think you should tell us how old they are in our years, maybe by saying how many months ...

I would say that I'm happy that I'm sleeping on the couch but my heart seems to ache. Wow isn't that a little deep for a five year old? Yuu ...

Alo people, I haven't posted anything for AGES :shock: :shock: :shock: ... anyway,I haven't divided this up into chapters, so each part ends very suddenly...that's all I think “Cañónoscuridad An ...

WOW! I love it!! basically all your mistakes were typos... wow. GO DRAGONS!! I sighed, and swung my head to the new visitor .Amber curls framed my tear-drop face and ...